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Um, about the backgrounds. They are a very nice touch, but a couple of comics back Jack and Cindy got buzzed by a large jet. The pilot might be good, but good enough to zip by ten feet off the deck right next to a building? The fight with Max is exactly right for a ninja, though. If the other guy makes a mistake — nail ’em for it!
I wish it were something as awesome as that. The truth is I just got far too enthusiastic with the eyebrows in that panel and noticed when it was too late, and then just hoped no one would notice (curses. π )
wait a minute, the comments about the pilot triggered something *ahem* “I’m not good, I’m not even great I’m the BEST damn pilot the Alliance has got!” heh Mass Effect
June 19th, 2009 at 9:33 pm
AHHHHHH NO WAYSSSSS!!!!!
Oh i have been doing that storyboarding by the way but I may have to rethink my take on max now. SHOCKED!
June 19th, 2009 at 10:46 pm
notice that Cindy just stands there, kinda pulling off a helpless-dame look….
June 20th, 2009 at 2:59 am
me thinks if jack made his method of attacking his name he would be Jack Gutpuncher
June 20th, 2009 at 1:55 pm
Woo! times for some woop-ass! Great work and I like the back round on the last two panels.
June 21st, 2009 at 1:51 pm
Um, about the backgrounds. They are a very nice touch, but a couple of comics back Jack and Cindy got buzzed by a large jet. The pilot might be good, but good enough to zip by ten feet off the deck right next to a building? The fight with Max is exactly right for a ninja, though. If the other guy makes a mistake — nail ’em for it!
June 21st, 2009 at 5:26 pm
That pilot is so damn good.
June 22nd, 2009 at 12:31 am
desertrat i know what you mean the way the trees were drawn moving in an earlyer strip was so unrealistic π
June 22nd, 2009 at 5:48 am
Maybe the pilot went in sideways?
June 27th, 2009 at 12:48 am
In panel 3, Max’s and Jack’s eyebrows are the same size. It’s like Jack’s grow when he ‘powers up’ during a fight.
June 27th, 2009 at 1:09 am
I wish it were something as awesome as that. The truth is I just got far too enthusiastic with the eyebrows in that panel and noticed when it was too late, and then just hoped no one would notice (curses. π )
July 7th, 2009 at 3:25 am
Hello. I think the article is really interesting. I am even interested in reading more. How soon will you update your blog?
December 31st, 2009 at 1:39 pm
@disconnected
well u gotta admit tht guts are more damage prone (due to squishyness) than faces (due to being mostly bone)
December 31st, 2009 at 1:40 pm
no! jacks eyebrows should expand!! just like goku grew hair and yelled to get more power!
May 22nd, 2010 at 4:14 pm
wait a minute, the comments about the pilot triggered something *ahem* “I’m not good, I’m not even great I’m the BEST damn pilot the Alliance has got!” heh Mass Effect