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I have a feeling Gavin will not take this lightly, especially since part of the reason they broke in in the first place was to get Craig out. Someone’s gonna get his teeth back in a non-desirable fashion.
It’s good, but I think you’re overusing the closeups a bit in this scene. Try showing a little perspective now and then, too much closeup feels kinda off.
Of course, that could be the effect you’re going for, in which case, well done. It just seems like I have to back away from the screen to see peoples’ faces properly.
*Take a deep breath*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooo I did not.
Not at the moment actually. The deal was that the Hackers leave Jack and his family alone (as well as not killing Max in that same encounter). The girls were not mentioned and I doubt socializing, as awful as it is with Craig, would count as breaking the deal.
On my own note…I just cannot stand people who take credit where it is definitely not due. M.I. had this get crammed into a tiny cell and it took a full scale Hacker ambush to get him out. I would have accepted him saying “I got friends in high places, babe.” but to take credit for escaping the M.I. on his own…..I have lost any iota of possible respect I may or may not have had for Craig and I will be hard pressed to reconsider my current stance.
**** you Craig…just….**** you.
On minor note, not sure if Craig actually deserted so much as decided to go AWOL for a bit. I’m sure there is some minor difference.
This is creepy. Is Craig being made out to be the accidentally rapist type of villain?
… the villain that ends up being raping the girl he loves and then completely regretting his actions and tries to make up for by drastic means or blames her for the rape …. You see it more in soap opera stories.
Also, as far as things go with Craig- there is no reason to assume AWOL or deserting just because he isn’t at the base anymore. After all, if you recall from the first arc he never even stayed at Gavin’s headquarters in the first place. Plus he isn’t going against any rules that’ve been thusly produced in the story that restrict the hackers. So, all-in-all, depending on how Mr. Author wants to steer the story he can simply have Gavin respond in a plethora of different ways, have any character stumble across the scene, have Craig kidnap Angel with or without her friend, have Mr. Monsterguy come to take Craig back, have Craig injure angel or visa-versa and either Jack or Gavin seeks revenge, ect, ect, ect…
Hell, Mr. Author could even just have the Craig and the girls part ways after a conversation in plenty of different moods and leave it to be brought up later to trigger or augment some situation.
December 13th, 2010 at 2:17 pm
You realize that this comic must be turned into a parody of the David Caruso meme.
December 13th, 2010 at 2:22 pm
I love that Craig seems to think nothing of the entire situation.
December 13th, 2010 at 2:49 pm
Knowing the rules of drama, Gavin’s hunt for Craig (he doesn’t like deserters, as we well know) is going to conclude in the next few strips.
December 13th, 2010 at 3:18 pm
I have a feeling Gavin will not take this lightly, especially since part of the reason they broke in in the first place was to get Craig out. Someone’s gonna get his teeth back in a non-desirable fashion.
December 13th, 2010 at 3:31 pm
how could you not miss those blue eyes
December 13th, 2010 at 3:55 pm
I Foresee a future with more Facepunching
December 13th, 2010 at 5:26 pm
Soo Smooth Craig !!!!! ; )
December 13th, 2010 at 11:10 pm
@nicknacksss lol yea me 2.. i c a LOT of facepunching in the near future
December 14th, 2010 at 2:07 am
dont particularly like craig
December 14th, 2010 at 2:19 am
^
Though this strip seems to give a better impression of him.
December 14th, 2010 at 3:16 am
last panel makes me feel sorry for having him as a bad guy.
December 14th, 2010 at 6:43 am
NO I DID NOT MISS YOU CRAIG.
LOL. JK. He’s a funny wanna-be-villain.
December 14th, 2010 at 7:19 am
I gotta admit, his eyes are drawn really cute there, but I still hate that son of a but monkey!
December 14th, 2010 at 7:40 am
It’s good, but I think you’re overusing the closeups a bit in this scene. Try showing a little perspective now and then, too much closeup feels kinda off.
Of course, that could be the effect you’re going for, in which case, well done. It just seems like I have to back away from the screen to see peoples’ faces properly.
December 14th, 2010 at 7:55 am
Correction, missing two teeth.
Even classier.
December 14th, 2010 at 11:51 am
I didn’t miss him…
I liked him more when he was helping poor Frankie.
+2 cents
December 14th, 2010 at 12:12 pm
*Take a deep breath*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooo I did not.
December 14th, 2010 at 1:57 pm
“I missed you alright…with my fist! *punches square in the face*”
December 14th, 2010 at 2:05 pm
I’m gussing… no.
December 14th, 2010 at 5:58 pm
they look terrified, the poor things.
is he violating the terms of the deal between jack and the hackers?
December 15th, 2010 at 11:22 am
To taltamir.
Not at the moment actually. The deal was that the Hackers leave Jack and his family alone (as well as not killing Max in that same encounter). The girls were not mentioned and I doubt socializing, as awful as it is with Craig, would count as breaking the deal.
On my own note…I just cannot stand people who take credit where it is definitely not due. M.I. had this get crammed into a tiny cell and it took a full scale Hacker ambush to get him out. I would have accepted him saying “I got friends in high places, babe.” but to take credit for escaping the M.I. on his own…..I have lost any iota of possible respect I may or may not have had for Craig and I will be hard pressed to reconsider my current stance.
**** you Craig…just….**** you.
On minor note, not sure if Craig actually deserted so much as decided to go AWOL for a bit. I’m sure there is some minor difference.
December 15th, 2010 at 5:38 pm
This is creepy. Is Craig being made out to be the accidentally rapist type of villain?
… the villain that ends up being raping the girl he loves and then completely regretting his actions and tries to make up for by drastic means or blames her for the rape …. You see it more in soap opera stories.
December 16th, 2010 at 10:21 am
“Miss me?”
[is tasered by angel]
“Only for lack of getting to do that.”
December 16th, 2010 at 10:36 am
Also, as far as things go with Craig- there is no reason to assume AWOL or deserting just because he isn’t at the base anymore. After all, if you recall from the first arc he never even stayed at Gavin’s headquarters in the first place. Plus he isn’t going against any rules that’ve been thusly produced in the story that restrict the hackers. So, all-in-all, depending on how Mr. Author wants to steer the story he can simply have Gavin respond in a plethora of different ways, have any character stumble across the scene, have Craig kidnap Angel with or without her friend, have Mr. Monsterguy come to take Craig back, have Craig injure angel or visa-versa and either Jack or Gavin seeks revenge, ect, ect, ect…
Hell, Mr. Author could even just have the Craig and the girls part ways after a conversation in plenty of different moods and leave it to be brought up later to trigger or augment some situation.
December 16th, 2010 at 10:38 am
[stares at post…]
I am just not going to bother with those grammatical errors. I just. Don’t. Care.
[raughsdibgydfgbffffffffffff]
December 18th, 2010 at 10:11 am
“doubt socializing, as awful as it is with Craig, would count as breaking the deal.”
I seriously doubt he is there to socialize though…
December 23rd, 2010 at 12:33 am
He’s…almost endearing, here.