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Eh, I was partly right about Max. Jack’s reactions are always hilarious, though, hahaha
Oh, by the way, “throught” and “agian” shoud probably be fixed. ;D
Just to clarify on all the spelling mistakes of late (without sounding completely like I am making excuses, I hope.): I am not a good speller. To compensate for this I have been relying a lot on spell checkers, but somewhere along the line open office stopped spell checking the Jack cannon script. I noticed this (a bit too late) and fixed it by basically making a new document.
SO!
Thank you so much to the people who have pointed out the mistakes I have stupidly over looked, I seriously appreciate it. Without you the comic would be full of errors.
I also think I should mention for when I get the book off the ground, I am having a professional proofread the whole thing and editing it accordingly. I’ve actually already have them go over the first 113 pages.
So help me, there will be no dumb errors in the final printed product.
And again, everyone, thanks for helping me out when I miss something. I really appreciate it.
You know, “Sorry about the attempted murder thing.” is not something I would really want to hear. There’s not really anything to say after someone pulls that one on you. “Hey man, sorry about that whole attempted murder buisiness.” “Oh, that? No big deal, it happens, man!”
is this mysterios object plot relevant?
oo! oo!
is it an alien life form sent down drom outer space to make first contact with the humans only to be squashed by jack. and now the jaded alien has sent messages back to its homeland. and then it turns out their one weakness is rubber… or souls.
that would be ausome… cause you could totally point to this had say foreshadowing plus u’ve got sum motv thar for the aliens…
also i would ‘preciate it cause right now the only pun with Crystal i can think of right now is “crystal clear” which i’ve already used.
… well actually anything thats Jaded will do…
oh! i got one.
a dissilusioned, vegitarian, jewel theif who has a crush on Crystal, also his name should be Mack Bauer…
then you have a JADEd gent out to steal Crystal’s heart… all 24 CARROTS
heh
September 25th, 2009 at 5:22 pm
haha shes like “Think he’d be used to it by now” Keep up the awesomeness!
September 25th, 2009 at 5:39 pm
Damn it, I was looking forward to seeing Max jump out and scare the shit out of both of them lol
September 25th, 2009 at 10:38 pm
Eh, I was partly right about Max. Jack’s reactions are always hilarious, though, hahaha
Oh, by the way, “throught” and “agian” shoud probably be fixed. ;D
September 25th, 2009 at 10:44 pm
OMGGGGGG!!!!
Thanks for pointing it out.
September 25th, 2009 at 10:48 pm
(Frankies a Chick Deatgmotto lol) well…he sure does like poping out of random places alot dosent he?
September 25th, 2009 at 10:48 pm
*deathmotto
September 25th, 2009 at 11:03 pm
Just to clarify on all the spelling mistakes of late (without sounding completely like I am making excuses, I hope.): I am not a good speller. To compensate for this I have been relying a lot on spell checkers, but somewhere along the line open office stopped spell checking the Jack cannon script. I noticed this (a bit too late) and fixed it by basically making a new document.
SO!
Thank you so much to the people who have pointed out the mistakes I have stupidly over looked, I seriously appreciate it. Without you the comic would be full of errors.
I also think I should mention for when I get the book off the ground, I am having a professional proofread the whole thing and editing it accordingly. I’ve actually already have them go over the first 113 pages.
So help me, there will be no dumb errors in the final printed product.
And again, everyone, thanks for helping me out when I miss something. I really appreciate it.
September 26th, 2009 at 12:25 am
is it crystal that is saying “dang your jumpy” from the other bush?
September 26th, 2009 at 12:39 am
Yeah, I was wondering that too, but I think its supposed to just be max.
September 26th, 2009 at 12:53 am
Just max. Crystal isn’t in there with him. That would just be WEIRD.
September 26th, 2009 at 5:31 am
Weird….or completely awesome?
September 26th, 2009 at 5:36 am
Maybe awesome for Max :p
September 26th, 2009 at 9:24 am
oh ok. I was thinking she was. Then “He”* haha.
September 28th, 2009 at 10:39 am
You know, “Sorry about the attempted murder thing.” is not something I would really want to hear. There’s not really anything to say after someone pulls that one on you. “Hey man, sorry about that whole attempted murder buisiness.” “Oh, that? No big deal, it happens, man!”
OH. MY.
That would actually be super-epic!!!
September 28th, 2009 at 3:23 pm
yeah but with Jack, it actually does happen. all too often lol
October 31st, 2009 at 2:14 pm
lol im making a gruop of images of funny moments in this and this is going in it
January 5th, 2010 at 5:15 pm
Ah-HAH!
plot-HOLE alert
weewoweewoweewoweewo
ther in NOTHING on hees shu!
hah!
(i checked… same shoe)
lol
PS: luv the comic…
January 5th, 2010 at 5:16 pm
to explain… about 10 comics ago Max said he had sumtink on his shoe.
cookie now?
January 5th, 2010 at 6:03 pm
Oh man he woulda scraped my mysterious object off his shoe before entering class. A for effort though.
January 9th, 2010 at 6:49 pm
is this mysterios object plot relevant?
oo! oo!
is it an alien life form sent down drom outer space to make first contact with the humans only to be squashed by jack. and now the jaded alien has sent messages back to its homeland. and then it turns out their one weakness is rubber… or souls.
that would be ausome… cause you could totally point to this had say foreshadowing plus u’ve got sum motv thar for the aliens…
also i would ‘preciate it cause right now the only pun with Crystal i can think of right now is “crystal clear” which i’ve already used.
… well actually anything thats Jaded will do…
oh! i got one.
a dissilusioned, vegitarian, jewel theif who has a crush on Crystal, also his name should be Mack Bauer…
then you have a JADEd gent out to steal Crystal’s heart… all 24 CARROTS
heh
February 15th, 2012 at 9:34 am
All the characters i used to not like, but are starting to like have such adorable eyes. (Frankie, max.)
May 29th, 2020 at 4:27 am
To put this in 2020 meme terms, Max is Jack’s FBI agent.